Question

英语作文请帮忙修改

七八年没看过英语了，都忘了，有任何问题的麻烦指出来，谢谢！！
Advertisements:Good or Bad
Nowadays,advertisement is a very common medium in our daily life.We can get it though TV,see it at bus station or show window of department store,and listen it from radio.Our daily life is filled with various advertisements which can provide useful information to us.In a word,advertisement is playing a very important role in our daily life.
People have different opinion to advertisement.Some people welcome advertisement because they think advertisement can make them more convenient.When new products appear on the market,the people can know the function of the new products through advertisements and evaluate them.But some people hold the negative view.They think many advertisements amplified the merits of products and condense the defect of products.Besides,during we watching a very attractive TV program or a basketball game,advertisements always disturb us.
My point is that we should welcome advertisements because they actually make our daily life more convenient.But meanwhile,we have to confine their disadvantages to the lowest level,and utilize their advantages.Broadcasting advertisements on appropriate time,through appropriate medium and by appropriate content can bring us a colorful life.

Answer 1

Advertisements:Good or Bad
Nowadays,advertisement is a very common medium in our daily life. We can get it though TV, see it at bus stop and displaying windows of department stores, and listen from radio.Our daily life is filled with various advertisements which can provide us with useful information. In a word, advertisement is playing a very important role in our daily life.

People hold different opinions of advertisement.Some people welcome advertisements because they think advertisements make their life more convenient. When new products come along at the market, people get to know the function of new products through advertisements and evaluate them accordingly. But some people hold negative views: they think many advertisements overstated the merits of products but neglected the defects of them. Besides, when we are watching a very attractive TV program or a basketball game, advertisements always disturb our interests and destroy our good mood.

My point is that we should welcome advertisements because they actually make our daily life more convenient. However,we have to cut their disadvantages to the lowest level while utilizing their advantages. Broadcasting advertisements with appropriate contents on appropriate time and through appropriate medium can make our lifes much more colourful.

我以前一直做英语语篇改错的，希望我的纠错对你有帮助。

Answer 2

不好意思，很想帮你，但是看不懂

Answer 3

Nowadays,advertisement is a very common media in our daily life.We can get it though TV,see it at bus station or show window of department store,and hear it in radio.Our daily life is filled with various advertisements which provide useful information to us.In a word,advertisement is playing a more and more important role in our daily life.
People have different opinion to advertisements.Some people welcome advertisement because they think advertisement can make them live a more convenient life .When new products appear in the market, people can know the function of the new products through advertisements and evaluate them a.However, some people hold the opposite view.They think many advertisements amplified the merits of products as well as condense the defects of them.Besides,you could image what would we feel about a suddenly appearing advertisement when we are abosorbed in a very attractive TV program or a basketball game.
My point of view is that we should welcome advertisements because they actually make our daily life more convenient.But meanwhile,we have to confine their disadvantages to the lowest level,and utilize their advantages.Broadcasting advertisements on appropriate time,through appropriate medium and by appropriate content can bring us a colorful life.
第三段我没修改，自己的观点自就拿去用吧己修改下比较好。第一二段改了几个句式和语法，看着好的话 。
还好刚考研结束，英语水平没掉下去

Answer 4

see it at bus stations or show window of department stores
listen it from radio==listen to the radio
People have different opinion to advertisement==People have different opinions on advertisements
the people can know the function == people can know the function
during we watching a very ==while we watching a very

Answer 5

感觉是从中文硬翻过来的，有些用法有点生硬。。。

Answer 6

Advertisements:Good or Bad
Nowadays,advertisements are a very common media in our daily life.We can get them though TV,see them at bus station or show window of department stores,and listen them from radio.Our daily life is filled with various advertisements which can provide useful information to us.In a word,advertisements are playing a very important role in our daily life.
People have different opinions on advertisements.Some people welcome advertisements because they think advertisements can make them more convenient.When new products appear in the market,people can know the function of the new products through advertisements and evaluate them.But some people hold the negative view.They think many advertisements amplify the merits of the products and condense the defect of the products.Besides,while we are watching a very attractive TV program or a basketball game,advertisements always disturb us.
My point is that we should welcome advertisements because they actually make our daily life more convenient.But meanwhile,we have to confine their disadvantages to the lowest level,and utilize their advantages.Broadcasting advertisements on appropriate time,through appropriate medium and in appropriate content can bring us a colorful life.

说实话，楼主作文写得不错。只是一些小毛病。而且如果能尽量避免一些平庸的句式会更好
全篇如果用单数就都用单数，复数就都用复数advertisements。有些固定词组用错了，见更改后正文。