Question

拜托你们抽空帮我翻译一下（杜绝翻译器，语句尽量优美些，谢谢）

Action电器公司是个高瞻远瞩的公司，我知道你们正在开拓新市场，尤其要在美国闯下一片天地；正因为如 此，你们需要一位积极、肯负责的业务代表。在神奇厨具用品公司，我们将产品在美国的市场占有率提高了百分之二十五，这正足以证明我有能力在当地推销产品。
如果能进入贵公司工作，对我来说可以好好继续学习，也是个大好机会。我希望能成为Action电器公司的一员。谢谢。

Answer 1

翻译如下：Action Appliances is a forward-looking company. I am aware that you are expanding into new markets, particularly in the US. Thus you are going to need aggressive, take-charge sales representatives. At Magic Kitchen, during my five years there, we expanded our US. market share by 25%. This is just one example of my ability to go out there and sell products.
A position with your company would be both a learning experience and a great opportunity. I look forward to becoming part of the Action team. Thank you.

Answer 2

Action Appliances is an far-sighting company. As far as I know, you are trying to stepping into new markets, in particular, the American market. Therefore, I believe that you must need a positive business delegate to take charge of it. In the Magic Kitchen company, we have succeed in raising our market share in the American market to twenty-five percent, a good demonstration that I have the capability to promote our products locally.
If I am accepted as an employee in your company, that would be a good chance for me to continue to learn. And I'm really looking forward to that.

Answer 3

Action is the company electric appliance company, far-sighted, I know that you are developing new markets in the United States, especially rushed down the one world; Because of such as this, you need a positive and take-charge representatives. In magic kitchen supplies company, we will products in the United States increased by 25 percent market share, which is enough to prove that I have the ability to local marketing products.
If can enter your company work, for me to continue to learn, also can be a good chance. I hope to become a member of the electric company Action. Thank you.

Answer 4

上面的有点小瑕疵，我改了下。
Action Appliances is a forward-looking company. I am aware that you are expanding into new markets, particularly in US. Thus you need an aggressive, accountable sales representative. During my term, Magic Kitchen's share in US market grew 25%, which proves my ability in selling.
I believe a position in your company would be not only self-rewarding experience, but also a great opportunity. I'm looking forward to becoming a player in your team. Thank you.