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帮我修改一段英文翻译，谢谢大家，这个是有道翻译了，我大概修改了下，但还是感觉不太对，谢谢大家~

中文：随着中国居民收入的日益提高，银行的理财业务不断的发展，人们的金融投资和风险意识也日渐增强，与其在通货膨胀中让手中的货币贬值，不如购买一些金融产品来保值。所以，个人理财业务的规模在不断扩大，形式也在逐渐成熟。那么，就有必要对其进行研究，去发现这一业务中是否存在问题或者风险。本文通过对我国商业银行个人理财业务的问题分析和风险研究，提出了对问题的解决方法，以及对风险的防范和监控的措施。
英文：With increasing the income of the Chinese residents, bank Financial Management business continually development, people's financial investment and risk consciousness and its growing inflation, let the currency devaluation, the hand than buying some financial products to hedge. So, the personal financial management business continues to expand the scale of, form is also in mature gradually. So, it is necessary to carry out their research, to discover whether exist in the business problem or risk. This article through to our country commercial bank individual financing business problem analysis and risk, proposes a method to solve the problems of risk, and prevent and control measures.

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英文：With the increase of the Chinese household income and the continuous development of bank's cash management business, people's senses of financial investment and risk consciousness also improved day by day. Instead of leaving their cash to devaluate, people would rather choose to hedge by buying certain financial products. Then the scale of personal financial management business continues to expand, and becoming more and more mature in its form. It is necessary to study in order to discover whether problems or risks exist in such kind of business. Through the research and analysis of the problems in individual financing business in Chinese commercial banks and the risks, this paper put foreward some solution to the problems, and adviced on prevention and monitoring measures.

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