Question

请贵人帮我检查一下英语语法！急！！！

Is it the first time you come to Starbucks?
请问你是第一次来星巴克喝咖啡吗？
What attracts you to enter starbucks?
你觉得星巴克有什么地方吸引您走进来？
For the services of Starbucks outlets, do you think they are very consistent?
对于星巴克个分店的服务，你觉得很一致吗？
End point in your coffee, the staff would repeat the name of your order to another in Italian, what is your feeling for this process of service delivery?
在你点完咖啡，服务员都会以意大利语在重复一次你点的咖啡给另一位服务人员，这样的服务流程给你什么感受？
How do you think the mark cup of Starbuck for coffee?
星巴克以马克杯装咖啡，你的感受如何呢？
Would you have noticed the Starbucks shop decorating?
请问你曾经注意过星巴克店内的装潢吗？ 他给你怎样的感觉？
Would you have noticed the color of Starbucks shop?
请问你曾经注意过星巴克店内的颜色吗？这样的颜色组合给你怎样的感觉？
Do you like the Starbucks music?
你喜欢星巴克的音乐吗？她带给你怎样的感觉？
Would you have noticed the Starbucks trademark?
请问你注意过星巴克的商标吗？他给你怎样的感觉？
Have you ever sit in sofa of Starbucks? Why sit and what is your feeling?
对于星巴克店内的沙发椅，你曾经去坐过吗？为什么会想去坐呢？她带给你怎样的感觉呢？
非常谢谢小羽小虎魔法师，根据你的意见我把后面的题目也修改了。希望你帮我看看还有什么错误。。Great thanks!
p.s 你在同一个意思有好多不同的表达法，很厉害哦！我回去熟记！^_^

11. How do you think the cupboard which use to display the sucker and other goods? How does it impress you?
你觉得星巴克店内摆放的吸管等物品的备品柜，带给你什么样的感觉？
12. After coming into Starbucks, have you ever noticed the smell inside Starbucks? What is your feeling for that?
在你进入店内时，你是否曾注意到星巴克店内的气味吗？带给你怎样的感觉呢？
13. Do you have any particular feelings when you use the toilet of Starbucks?
对于星巴克的洗手间，你在使用时又没有什么特别的感觉呢？

Answer 1

语法都没有什么问题,除了有几句的Would you have noticed...?直接用Have you noticed ...?就好。另外，只能用What do you think of 或 How do you like, 不能用How do you think...? 最后就是sit的过去分词是sat, 不是sit.
下面是我翻译的这几个句子，可能感觉会更好一些，供你参考:-)

Is this the first time you come to Starbucks?
请问你是第一次来星巴克喝咖啡吗？
What attracts you to come into starbucks?
你觉得星巴克有什么地方吸引您走进来？
Do you think the service of each Starbucks' outlet consistent?
对于星巴克个分店的服务，你觉得很一致吗？
After ordering your coffee, the waiter/waitress would repeat its Italian name to another one. What's your feeling for this flow of service?
在你点完咖啡，服务员都会以意大利语在重复一次你点的咖啡给另一位服务人员，这样的服务流程给你什么感受？
How do you like the mark cup for coffee in Starbuck?
星巴克以马克杯装咖啡，你的感受如何呢？
Have you noticed the decoration inside Starbucks? How does it impress you?
请问你曾经注意过星巴克店内的装潢吗？ 他给你怎样的感觉？
Have you noticed the colors in Starbucks? What's your feeling for this color combination?
请问你曾经注意过星巴克店内的颜色吗？这样的颜色组合给你怎样的感觉？
Do you like the Starbucks' music? What sensation do you get from it?
你喜欢星巴克的音乐吗？她带给你怎样的感觉？
Have you noticed the Starbucks' trademark? What's your feeling for that?
请问你注意过星巴克的商标吗？他给你怎样的感觉？
Have you ever sat in sofa of Starbucks? Why do you want to sit there and how do you feel?
对于星巴克店内的沙发椅，你曾经去坐过吗？为什么会想去坐呢？她带给你怎样的感觉呢？

11. How do you think the cupboard which use to display the sucker and other goods? How does it impress you?
你觉得星巴克店内摆放的吸管等物品的备品柜，带给你什么样的感觉？
12. After coming into Starbucks, have you ever noticed the scent inside Starbucks? What is your feeling for that?
在你进入店内时，你是否曾注意到星巴克店内的气味吗？带给你怎样的感觉呢？
13. Do you have any special feelings when you use the bathroom/rest room of Starbucks?
对于星巴克的洗手间，你在使用时又没有什么特别的感觉呢？