Question

雅思大作文，求批改，求打分

Nowadays we are producing more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening.What can government do to help reduce rubbish

Nowadays, people are facing an unprecedented issue about rubbish problem. Personally, the problem is caused by three factors, which are growing number of people, unresonable construction anf the complexity of processing rubbish.
First, the world's population is steadily increasing, which lead to this severe problem. Moreover, the government construct an unreasonable rebbish disposal place that is to small for a city. Therefore, the amount of rubbish is ascend rapidly for the reason of unproper construction. In addition, it is a very sophiscated process to disposal rubbish because rubbish has to be classified first to process in terms of protecting environment.
Considering the growth of population, government could implement policies to control population such as on-child policy. Furthermore, the government is supposed to construct a suitable space to process rubbish, which is proper for the capact of the city. What's more, the government also needs to minimize the diposal process. For instance, inviting professional stuff is a brilliant idea to make the process more efficient.
In conclusion, the increase of the amount of rubbish is inevitably due to several reasons i listed above. It is a long term for the government to overcome this difficulties. They should control the population, construct a suitable rubbish disposal place and process rubbish more efficient. On the other hand, our individual could behave ourselves well in order to minimize rubbish disposal. For example, reducing unnecessary pakadge to minimize rubbish as well as protect the environment.

Answer 1

检查可以借助软件。易改英语写作辅助软件还可以。纠错，润色以及全文统计功能不错。
目前还有推出托福作文打分服务，雅思的有没有不大清楚。
百度下易改。
希望能解决您的问题。

Answer 2

写作水平真的不错

Answer 3

6——6.5分，到不了7. 百度一下“卓信雅思”可以知道why