Question

求英语高手，汉译英，我用Google等翻译器，翻译的不通顺，所以，请高人出手相帮，不胜感激，原文如下

尊敬的Norm老师：
我考虑了很久，最终还是决定，给你说一说我的一些想法。
首先，我的英语实在太差，所以不能用英语给您交流，委托同学翻译给您英文版的，希望能传达出我的真实想法，希望您能谅解。
您现在讲的课程，对于我未来的工作和生活，是很有用处的，我也很想好好地学习，渴望能领会到课程的精髓，然而，言语沟通有障碍……已经大四的我，已经没有机会再重拾英语……所以，为了少给您添麻烦，也是更充分的使用这些不多的在校时间，我希望能自己修习客户关系管理（CRM）和国际市场营销（IM），恳切得到您的批准，学生不胜感激。
当然，为了对其他同学公平，这两门课程（CRM&IM），您都不需要给我考试分数，或者直接给0分。
此致
敬礼

Answer 1

Dear teacher Norm,
I considered for a very long time, and finally decided to tell you some of my thoughts.
First of all, my English is poor, so I can't communicate in English with you, and entrust the students to translate for you in English, hoping to convey my true thoughts, hope you will understand.
The courses you are talking about now, on my future work and life, is really very useful, I want to learn it well, eager to understand the essence of the courses, however, there are barriers to verbal communication.......the already-senior me, has no chance to regain English.......so, in order to give you lesser trouble, and to fully use more of the little time in school, I wish to attend Customer Relationship Management (CRM) and International Marketing (IM) on my own, to earnestly get your approval, the students appreciated.
Of course, to be fair to the other students, these two courses (CRM&IM), you don't need to give me test scores, or directly give 0.
Sincerely
Salute
用了一段时间翻译，请好好使用。:)

Answer 2

虽然有很多答案拉，那我也来翻译一下。。有些话没有直译，为了让意思更通顺。。
Dear Dr. Norm (如果不是doctor的话就mr.就好），

I finally decided to share some of my thoughts with you after considering for a long time.

At first, my English is so poor that I have to ask a friend to translate what's on my mind into English instead of writing directly to you in English. Hope you don't mind.

The courses you are teaching right now are really beneficial for my future work and life. I do want to work hard on them and learn the essences of these courses. However, as I stated, my poor English stopped me from doing so, given that I am already a senior student in this college and there is no way i could pick up my English...So, to save some trouble for you and enable me to make full use of the little time left for me at this college, I hope i could study CRM and IM by myself. I would really appreciate it if you grant my petition.

Of course, you don't have to grade me on these two courses or simply give me "0", it's fairer to the other students.

Best regards

追问

thank you all the same

Answer 3

Respect of Norm teacher:
I consider for a long time, finally decided, give you say some of my ideas.
First of all, my English is poor, so you can't use English, you exchange, entrust to your classmates in English translation, the hope can convey the message that I really think, hope you understand.
You speak it now courses, for my future work and life, is very useful, I also want to study well, eager to grasp the essence of the course, however, the speech communication obstacles are... Have senior of I, have already had no chance again English... So, for little to give you trouble, is also a full use of these little time at school, I hope I can study in the their customer relationship management (CRM) and international marketing (IM), sincere to get your approval, students be appreciated.
Of course, in order to other students fair, the two courses (CRM&IM), you need to give me the examination score, or directly to zero.
this
salute

追问

thank you all the same

Answer 4

Respect of Norm teacher:
I consider for a long time, finally decided, give you say some of my ideas.
First of all, my English is poor, so you can't use English, you exchange, entrust to your classmates in English translation, the hope can convey the message that I really think, hope you understand.
You speak it now courses, for my future work and life, is very useful, I also want to study well, eager to grasp the essence of the course, however, the speech communication obstacles are... Have senior of I, have already had no chance again English... So, for little to give you trouble, is also a full use of these little time at school, I hope I can study in the their customer relationship management (CRM) and international marketing (IM), sincere ?

追问

thank you all the same

Answer 5

Dear teacher Norm:

I thought for a long time, finally decided, give you say some of my ideas.

First of all, my English is very poor, so you can't use English to your exchange, commissioned by the students translate for your English version, hope to express my true feelings, I hope you can understand.

You now speak of the curriculum, for my future work and life, is very useful, I also want to learn, eager to understand the essence of curriculum, however, verbal communication disorders ... ... Have big four I, have no chance to pick up English again ... ... Therefore, in order to give you trouble, but also more fully use these little time at school, I hope to own practice of customer relationship management ( CRM ) and international marketing ( IM ), sincerely for your approval, students appreciate.

Of course, in order to other students fair, the two courses ( CRM&IM ), you don't need to give my test scores, or directly to the 0 division.

Sincerely yours

Salute

Answer 6

The norm teacher ： i thought for a long time, and finally decided to give you that my thoughts. first, my english was too bad, so i can't communicate in english to students and give you an english version of translator for you and wish to express what i really think, i hope you will understand. you now, for my future work and life is very useful, i would like to learn and longed to see the essence of course, however, communication isWith... that... have senior i have no chance to restore my english... that... therefore, in order not to give you trouble, is also a more complete use of these is not much at the time, i wish to own the customer relationship management （ crm ） and international marketing （ im ）, and earnestly with your approval, students will be appreciated. of course, for other students. the two courses （ crm

追问

thank you all the same