Question

英语短文改错！

短文改错！ This morning when I was running down the road near my house,the schooi bus was parked just ahead,and 10children were waiting there to get on So I had to stop to wait the children to get on.Then,I saw the driver,who was waving at me.puzzling,I walked towards her She shouted,“Chind,hurry up but get on”！I reply,“Oh,I’m just passing by.”She seemed to have realised her mistake after hearing from my words.Quickly,I shut the bus door and drove away.I slow began my run again,laughing to myself.It was a great things to be called younger,though I am almost 60years old now
除了你所说的，你仔细看看还有没有错的！

Answer 1

把was parked改成parked不用被动态；wait the children to get on在wait后面加for,固定搭配；puzzling改成puzzled，因为指人时要用过去分词；Chind,hurry up but get on改成Children,hurry up to get on;replied;realized;hearing from改成of,hear from是收到来信的意思；.I slow began my run again改成I slowly began my running again。希望对楼主有帮助 应该除了个别单词 如school还有标点，基本语法上没有什么问题了

Answer 2

更正在括号处标明，总共十处错误！

This morning when I was running down the road near my house, (the改成a) school bus was (parked改成parking) just ahead,and 10 children were waiting there to get on. So I had to stop to wait (加入for) the children to get on.Then, I saw the driver, who was waving at me. (Puzzling改成Puzzled), I walked towards her. She shouted, “Child, hurry up (but改成and) get on”！I (reply改成replied), “Oh, I’m just passing by.” She seemed to have realised her mistake after hearing (去掉from) my words. Quickly, (I改成She) shut the bus door and drove away. I (slow改成slowly) began my run again, laughing to myself. It was a great (things改成thing) to be called younger, though I am almost 60 years old now.

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Answer 3

when I was 错了 你自己改改吧