Question

帮我检查一下我的英语作文有没有错。

My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor. Because they can help cure patients,and they work in the hispital. So I had a lot of dream. But now I want to be a vet, because I love animals . I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day. I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.

Answer 1

In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome , I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor. Because the doctors can cure patients,and they work in the hispital. So I had a lot of dreams. But now I want to be a vet, because I love animals . I often play with animals.Vets can look after and work with animals every day. I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
改了一部分，但是你究竟相当警察还是兽医啊？开头第一句明明写的是5年后要当警察啊。
望采纳，不懂继续交流

追问

我以为In five years 是我5岁时的意思

追答

那我再给你改。
when i was 5 ,I wanted to be a policeman.Because I thought policemen were very mighty and handsome and thus I wanted to be a policeman in the future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor. Because the doctors can cure patients,and they work in the hispital. So I had a lot of dreams. But now I want to be a vet, because I love animals . I often play with animals.Vets can look after and work with animals every day. I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.

Answer 2

My dream
In five years' time, I hope I can be a policeman. I think highly of policemen because they are courageous and xxx. When I was ten years old, I wanted to be a doctor. Being a doctor is noble, they can cure patients. Later on, I wanted to be a veterinarian because I loved animals. If I can be any one of those mentioned above in the future means my dream has come true.

Answer 3

I had a lot of dreams. 应为复数dreams.

Answer 4

Because they can help cure(ing) patients.
help doing ~

追问

不用去e再加吗

Answer 5

改正如下：
My dream
In five years ,I want to be a policeman.Because I think policemen are very mighty and handsome ,so I want to be a policeman in my future.When I was a ten-year-old child,I wanted to be a doctor. Because they can help cure patients,and they work in hispitals. So I had a lot of dreams. But now I want to be a vet, because I love animals . I often play with animals.Vets can look after animals and they can work with animals every day. I believe I can be a vet in my future because it is my dream.
Wish your dream would come true!祝你梦想成真！
老师祝你学习进步！
望采纳，多谢！^_^

追问

前面不用过去式吗

追答

你写的是in five years五年以后啊
如果是five years ago的话，那就用过去时。