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在线等一段英文改错，各位大侠帮忙纠正文中错误，先谢谢了！

Here are a few details of manager ZHAO’s letter
1. High school project

1) To establish sister schools. (US school will visit us on 9 June to 15 June, undetermined)
2) To establish the implement of credit system between two schools.(We will provide teaching program of Taiyuan Foreign Language School)
3) The students will use the weekend and the weekdays night to studies courses of US high school.
4) The students may get China and US high school diplomas when they graduated from school.
5) To enter the famous US, UK and Canada university directly.
6) The students can selects AP and ACT course for optional courses.

2. Cooperate with North Glasgow College

1) All the provision of this tripartite agreement can be executed except the application for ESOL authorized center.
2) According to the provision of the cooperation in running schools of this tripartite agreement, Shanxi University Business College hope to send two teachers to North Glasgow College in September to take two months study in ESOL course. We hope North Glasgow College waives the fee of them.
3) After the signing of the cooperation agreement, Starting in September 2012, Shanxi University Business College may recruit international class students who enroll the program of 2+2+1 bachelor's and master's degree liaison. Students take subjects during the first two years, after that they study in North Glasgow two years, and then, they could get Shanxi University Business College diploma and North Glasgow’s. If they continue to learn for another year, they may get the master of UK.

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Here are few details of manager ZHAO’s letter
1. High school project

1) To establish sister schools. (US school will visit us on 9 June to 15 June, undertermined yet)
2) To establish the implement of credit system between the two schools.(We will provide teaching program of Taiyuan Foreign Language School)
3) The students will utilize the nights of weekend and weekday to study courses of US high school.
4) The students may get China and US high school diplomas when they graduate from school.
5) To enter the famous US, UK and Canada universities directly.
6) The students can select AP and ACT course as optional courses.

2. Cooperate with North Glasgow College

1) All the provision of this tripartite agreement can be executed except the application for ESOL authorized center.
2) According to the provision of the cooperation in running schools of this tripartite agreement, Shanxi University Business College hope to dispatch two teachers to North Glasgow College in September to study ESOL course for 2 month. We hope North Glasgow College could waive the fee for them.
3) After signing the cooperation agreement, Starting in September 2012, Shanxi University Business College may recruit international class students who enroll the program of 2+2+1 bachelor's and master's degree liaison. The students take subjects during the first two years, after completing two years study in North Glasgow, they could get the diploma of Shanxi University Business College and North Glasgow. If they continue to learn another year, they may get the master of UK.