Question

能帮我看一下这个英语作文的错误吗？亲帮我改动一下，O(∩_∩)O谢谢

France is my dream place.There is a touch the sky Eiffel Tower,beautiful Seine River,the charming town,a beautiful street.
I think,all the Frence,like a beautiful painting.
I love Frence,Ilove everything there.

Answer 1

有点问题。。
There is a touch the sky Eiffel Tower。。。这是想表达什么意思
beautiful Seine River,the charming town,a beautiful street.
还有三个并列的东西，最后两个最好用and连接。。
另外，最后的一排的“法国”打错了。

追问

There is a touch the sky Eiffel Tower这里有高耸入云的埃菲尔铁塔。
请问一下，别的句子的语法有没有弄错啊！我有点不确定。
O(∩_∩)O谢谢

追答

错的有点多，你没见到我有一句话直接跳过去没评论了吗。= = ~~~~既然有人答了，咱就不说了~~= =~

Answer 2

基本上每句都有问题，看看我修改过的：
There is Eiffel Tower touching the sky, beautiful Seine River, the charming town and a beautiful street there.

I think that all land of Frence is like a beautiful painiting
I love Frence, and I love everything there.

Answer 3

France is my dream place. With Eiffel Tower, Seine River, charming towns, and beautiful streets,France is like a wonderful painting. I love France. I love every conner of France with the bottem of my heart!

Answer 4

France is my dream country. We can feeling the happiness of Eiffel Tower which is playing with the cloud; we can drive our mind flowing with water in Seine River; we can walk through alleys to listen the song singing by charming towns; we can stand by crossroads to see cars and people follow up their own life.

Answer 5

French is my dream place. There was a touch of Eiffel Tower, the beautiful Seine River, charming town, a beautiful street.
I think, all French, like a beautiful painting.
I love France, I love everything there.