Question

短文改错，在线等

Answer 1

According to (a) recent survey, about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job. By the upcoming summer vacation, this figure will increase (to) 72 percent. College students (work) as tutors, waiters oro salesmen. Why do (they) want part-time jobs? First, they want to earn money to help cover the increasing college tuition. Second, they hope to be (economically) independent and buy (what) they need.
In my opinion, by doing part-time jobs, college students (can) gain some social experience and broaden their (outlook). What's more, part-time jobs can provide (删掉to) them with (an) valuable opportunity to (know) the outside world. Yet it's of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs.
do part-time jobs虽然不算错，但有些中式，可以说work part-time jobs，或者take part-time jobs

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谢谢

Answer 2

1. 1行to后加the
2. 2行by 改为to
3.4行cover改为covering
4.5行 that改为what
5.倒数第四行must改为can
6.倒数第三行去掉provide后的to
7.倒数第二行knowing改为know
8.2行的were改为are
9.3行的we改为they
10.倒数第5行的independent改为independence

Answer 3

很简单啊！

Answer 4

建议自己百度一下，把前面的那些英语打上去，就会有原版正确的出来了。。

Answer 5

加the正确
by-to;
were-are
we-they
economical-economically
that-what
must-will
to them去掉to
knowing-know
Yet-Therefore