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LadiesandGentlemen,Goodafternoon!Asweallknow,in2008BeijingOlympicGameswillbeheld,ever...
Ladies and Gentlemen,Good afternoon!
As we all know, in 2008 Beijing Olympic Games will be held, every person are eagerly looking forward to its arrival, carefully exploring the life of the details, we can easily see that the Olympic spirit is everywhere.
Between neighbors, we help each other; colleagues, in addition to competition, everyone has even more made on the friendship of the first. Everyone has to start with oneself, the protection of the surrounding environment. Olympic atmosphere is diffuse in my home, parents have taken attention from the message of the Olympic Games, all brothers and sisters from time to time to talk about the various stories related to the Olympic Games.
Everyone is on the Olympic Games has its own expectations, and I also believe that China will certainly be able to better organize the Olympic Games and win honor for our country ！
I am proud of being a Chinese. I hope my country to be much stronger. I look forward to 2008, I will say to the world aloud: Welcome to Beijing.
Let’s bless for the Olympic Games 2008 in Beijing
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
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As we all know, in 2008 Beijing Olympic Games will be held, every person are eagerly looking forward to its arrival, carefully exploring the life of the details, we can easily see that the Olympic spirit is everywhere.
Between neighbors, we help each other; colleagues, in addition to competition, everyone has even more made on the friendship of the first. Everyone has to start with oneself, the protection of the surrounding environment. Olympic atmosphere is diffuse in my home, parents have taken attention from the message of the Olympic Games, all brothers and sisters from time to time to talk about the various stories related to the Olympic Games.
Everyone is on the Olympic Games has its own expectations, and I also believe that China will certainly be able to better organize the Olympic Games and win honor for our country ！
I am proud of being a Chinese. I hope my country to be much stronger. I look forward to 2008, I will say to the world aloud: Welcome to Beijing.
Let’s bless for the Olympic Games 2008 in Beijing
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
这篇小短文好像读不通，有问题。
谁能指出来并改正，重谢。还可以提高悬赏。
又加分了，帮帮忙吧，急用 展开
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Ladies and Gentlemen,Good afternoon!
As we all know, Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008. Every person is looking forward to its arrival eagerly. We can easily feel the Olympic spirit everywhere.
At home, we help our neighbors. At work, among the our colleagues, in addition to competition, everyone think of friendship before competition. In addition, everyone need to protect the surrounding environment. Olympic atmosphere also affected my family. My parents are constantly paying close attention to all kinds of news about the Olympic Games. My brothers and sisters tell us about various stories related to the Olympic Games from time to time.
Everyone has his own expectations on the Olympic Games. I believe that China will certainly be able to organize a successful Olympic Games and bring honor to our country ！
I am proud of being a Chinese. I hope my country will be much stronger. I am looking forward to the arrival of 2008. I will tell to everyone: "Welcome to Beijing". Let's bless for the Olympic Games 2008 in Beijing.
Thank you very much for listening.
As we all know, Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008. Every person is looking forward to its arrival eagerly. We can easily feel the Olympic spirit everywhere.
At home, we help our neighbors. At work, among the our colleagues, in addition to competition, everyone think of friendship before competition. In addition, everyone need to protect the surrounding environment. Olympic atmosphere also affected my family. My parents are constantly paying close attention to all kinds of news about the Olympic Games. My brothers and sisters tell us about various stories related to the Olympic Games from time to time.
Everyone has his own expectations on the Olympic Games. I believe that China will certainly be able to organize a successful Olympic Games and bring honor to our country ！
I am proud of being a Chinese. I hope my country will be much stronger. I am looking forward to the arrival of 2008. I will tell to everyone: "Welcome to Beijing". Let's bless for the Olympic Games 2008 in Beijing.
Thank you very much for listening.
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