Question

帮我检查一下是否有语法错误，O(∩_∩)O谢谢

When people send lucky money we always said: “Wishing you a prosperous new year, the red package brings” People always bought some present .Like snacks,fruits and so on.

Answer 1

When people send lucky money (we---they) always (said---say): “(Wishing---wish) you a prosperous new year, the red (package---packet) brings” People always (bought---buy) some (present---presents) (.---,)(Like---like) snacks,fruits and so on. 希望对你有帮助

Answer 2

When people send lucky money, they(人称) always say(表示一般情况，用一般现在时，和send保持一致): “Wish(祈使句) you a prosperous new year, the red package brings.” People always buy(理由同say) some presents( 复数形式) like(这里要和presents连着，不能加标点) snacks,fruits and so on.
标点需要注意

Answer 3

said改为say，wishing改为wish,bought改为buy present用复数