Question

怎么翻译下面这句话更好？帮下忙。

下面这句话需要翻译，怎么翻译比较好，请帮下忙！多谢！
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如果我有幸能进入复旦大学学习，我会努力完成以下计划：第一，我将系统地学习法律研究生的课程，认真汲取老师们传授的知识，弥补自己在法律方面的不足；第二，我想广泛阅读图书馆里的书，特别是历史书和推理书。
翻译成english

Answer 1

如果我有幸能进入复旦大学学习，我会努力完成以下计划：
If i am lucky enough to gain admission to the Fudan University,i will strive hard to accomplish the following plans;

第一，我将系统地学习法律研究生的课程，认真汲取老师们传授的知识，弥补自己在法律方面的不足；
Firstly,I will learn the course of a law master systematically, pay serious attention to gain the knowledge imparted by the teacher,enhance my weakness in the aspect of law.

第二，我想广泛阅读图书馆里的书，特别是历史书和推理书。
Secondly. I want to read the library books extensively especially books on history and reasoning.

Answer 2

If I'm lucky to enter FuDan university,I'll do my best to accomplish the following plans: First, I'll learn systematically the course for postgraduates majoring in law, obtain carefully what the teachers teach me to enrich my own knowledge of law ; Second, I'll read extensively books in the library, especially books on history and logistics.

Answer 3

If I had the chance to study in FuDang University,I will work hard to complite the following plants. First, I will studying law of graduate students', and work hard to study the knowledge that teachers'teached to make up the shortage in law. Secondly, I will read the books widely of the library,especially the history books and ratiocination books.

Answer 4

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哪里有英文