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急！！请英文高手帮忙修改一下英文翻译（句子通不通；有无语法错误）！急用！谢谢

《家》通过以觉慧为代表的青年一代与以高老太爷为代表的封建腐朽势力的激烈斗争，反映了当时的社会面貌。作品描写了大家庭内各种青年女性的不幸遭遇和悲剧命运,真实地反映出腐败的封建家族制度对青年女性的摧残，深刻地揭露了封建社会和家族制度的腐败与黑暗，控诉和揭示了大家族和旧礼教、旧道德的罪恶以及吃人本质，并且揭示了其必然灭亡的历史命运;同时，小说中还以极大的激情歌颂了一些青年女性对封建势力的英勇斗争,表现了新一代在五四革命思潮鼓舞下的觉醒与成长。作品中栩栩如生的女性形象，让人们在用心感受她们经历的痛苦的同时，唤起了人们去思考如何改变那些现实中不合理的状况，在悲剧根源的探索中为青年女性们寻找一条出路。
The novel Family reflected the prevailing social outlook through the fierce struggle between the younger generation represented by Juehui and the decadent feudal forces represented by MR. Gao. The work described a big family each kind of youth's feminine unfortunate bitter experience and the tragedy destiny,which really reflected the corrupt feudal family system to youth feminine devastating, exposed the feudal society and the family system corruption profoundly and dark, complained and promulgated the respected family and the old Confucianism, the old moral evil as well as eats the human essence, and promulgated the historical destiny which it perished inevitably;At the same time, in the novel also eulogized some youth female by the enormous fervor to the feudal influence heroic struggle, which displayed new one generation under May 4 revolutionary ideological trend inspiration awakening with the growth.In work lifelike feminine image, lets the people while pain which feels them to experience attentively, aroused the people to ponder how changed in these realities the unreasonable condition.Seeking an outlet in the tragedy root exploration for the youth females
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"Home" to Juehui represented by the young generation and high-Lao Taiye as the representative of the decadent feudal forces in the fierce struggle, reflected the prevailing social outlook. Description of the works of young women within the family's suffering and tragic fate, to reflect the real corruption of the feudal family system on the destruction of young women, deeply exposed the feudal society and family system of corruption and darkness, complaints and reveals the great Family and the old ethics, moral evil, and the old people to eat nature, and reveals the inevitable demise of the historical fate at the same time, stories with great passion also praises a number of young women on the heroic struggle of the feudal forces, the performance of a new generation In May 4 inspired by the revolutionary ideas of awakening and growth. Works lifelike image of women, so that people in the intentions of the pain they feel the same time, arouse the people to think how to change those realities in the unreasonable situation, to explore the root causes of the tragedy for the young women are looking for a way out.