Question

翻译一个句子（有悬赏）

I hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes aways.She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home work with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
有什么错的麻烦帮个忙改一下，并说下为什么（又追加）

Answer 1

是翻译还是改错啊

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改错

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I (could )hardly remember my grandmother. (She) used to (hold) me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she (passed) (away).(My memory on her was like miles away now.)
(Inversely, I memorize my grandfather very well.) He was tall, with broad shoulder(s) and a beard that turned from black (to) gray over ()years.He had a (heavy) voice() which set himself apart from (the) others in our (village). He was strong and powerful. In() fact, (once my classmates came to my home for playing and doing homework, my grandpa even scared them). (Even so), he was the gentlest man I have never (met).

括号里是改过的，有些句子保留了意思，改了表达方法
刚刚误删了，就有打了一遍
虽然晚了，但既然打了，还是发了
希望对你有帮助

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辛苦了，真是抱歉~