Question

写一篇关于科比的free talk。求英语大神帮我翻译一些句子。帮我修改一下。谢谢。

Hello everyone.Do you like Kobe Bryant？一个效力在洛杉矶湖人队的著名球星。 (用上whose)。I love Kobe, not because of his achievements, but because of his desire to win, the love of basketball. Believe or not ,he is my teacher.He taught me many things,科比曾经说过" If you're going to be focused on something, if you want to do something, you
can't, you can't go about it in a half-assed way. You really gotta dedicate
yourself to it, try to be the best at it. That's the only way."，是的，这句话给我留下了深刻的印象。Where there's a will , there's a way 。我希望在今后的学习中，我能够如科比一般勤奋，取得良好的成绩。
That's all,thanks for listening.

求学霸帮我把中文翻译成英文。万分感谢

Answer 1

Hello,everybody,do you know kobe bryrant? A superstar from Los Angeles Lakers, I love kobe ,not only because of his great success, but also he got a great drive to victory, and as a basketball junkie,he is my idol, my tutor. He taught me everything, Kobe once said " If you gonna be foucsed on all things, if you really wanna to, something you can't , you just can't drop it in the half way. You should really dedicate yourself into it, try to be the best of it. this is the only way", ,this is really impressive. Where there is a will ,there is a way. I hope in my life and study, I could follow his words and be diligent as he always be, and do a great job as he does.
That's all ,thanks for listening.

Answer 2

a big star in NBA whose home team is Laker.
Kobe used to say that
surely,these words leave me a deep impression
I really hope i could inherit his spirit and pay more effort in studying and achieve my goals finally