Question

这句话翻译成英文后怎么样？

原文：福岛核电站发生泄漏事故之后，日本东京电力公司从4月4号开始就向海中排放约1.1万吨反射性污水。 因此，韩国国民对海水以及食品的安全担忧日益加重，同时也导致了韩国政府不敢购买来自日本的农产品。
翻译后的：After Japan’s Fukushima nuclear plant accident took place, the Tokyo Electric Power Company began to release about 11,000 tons of radioactive sewage into the sea, which caused South Korean national public security concerns rose up. Moreover the government of South Korea has stop buying the agricultural product in Japan.
（翻译后的英文有错吗？）

Answer 1

原文：福岛核电站发生泄漏事故之后，日本东京电力公司从4月4号开始就向海中排放约1.1万吨反射性污水。 因此，韩国国民对海水以及食品的安全担忧日益加重，同时也导致了韩国政府不敢购买来自日本的农产品。
在你的翻译上修改了一下：
After the taking place of the fukushima nuclear power plant leakage accident, the Tokyo Electric Power Company began to discharge about 11,000 tons of radioactive wastewater into the sea since April 4, which caused South Korean national's concerns on seawater and food security increasing. Moreover the South Korea government is afraid to purchase the agricultural products from Japan.

另外按照中文意思还可以改进一下
After the fukushima nuclear power plant leakage accident, the Tokyo Electric Power Company began to discharge about 11,000 tons of radioactive wastewater into the sea since April 4, as a consequence the South Korean national's concerns on seawater and food security increasing, which caused the South Korea government to dare not purchase the agricultural products from Japan at the same time.

追问

太感激你了，不过我请教下您，原文中的英语段章是哪里错了呀？

追答

语法都对，主要是release, 排污水用discharge
其他有一些和中文意思对不上的地方——不敢购买

还有“因此、同时”
英文中连词和标点符号的使用比中文严谨

Answer 2

After Japan’s Fukushima nuclear plant accident took place, the Tokyo Electric Power Company started to release about 11,000 tons of radioactive sewage into the sea from forth April , which caused South Korean national public security concerns of water and food rose up. Moreover the government of South Korea has stop buying the agricultural product in Japan.

Answer 3

没写日期，从四月四日起the Tokyo electric power company from April 4th .....水和食品安全water and food safety concerns .... 中文资料里是说韩国政府不敢购买，你的翻译中是停止购买the south Korean government did not dare to buy agricultural products from Japan

Answer 4

差不多吧。倒数第二行has stopped buying

Answer 5

差不多~≧▽≦)/~你可以直接百度翻译看一下有没有错