Question

麻烦看一下这段翻译有没有明显的错误。

麻烦看一下这段翻译有没有明显的错误。福勒在见到奥萨博之后非常失望，因为他的外形和谈吐不符合特工这个职业。在他与奥萨博交谈的过程中，意外突然发生了，一个持枪的小个子男人劫持了文件，并威胁他们。奥萨博用自己的智慧化解了危机，让福勒知道了什么是真正的特工。
Fowler was disappointed after seeing ausable because his appearance and conversation didn't fit the profession. As he spoke to aussaab, an accident occurred and a small man with a gun hijacked the document and threatened them. Ausable USES his own wisdom to defuse the crisis and let fowler know what real agents are.

Answer 1

“因为他的外形和谈吐不符合特工这个职业”这句话的重点”特工“二字没翻译出来。
Because he doesn't fit the job of secret agents/spy.
“在他与奥萨博交谈的过程中，意外突然发生了，一个持枪的小个子男人劫持了文件，并威胁他们”一般是什么什么 occurrence，accident一般用happen，
During his conversation with Saab, an accident suddenly happened, and a small armed man hijacked the document and threatened them
“奥萨博用自己的智慧化解了危机，让福勒知道了什么是真正的特工”，较长的句子并列最好用“，and”或者“；”
Ausable solved the crisis with his wisdom, and let Fowler know what is the real secret agent/spy.

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真是太谢谢了

Answer 2

没有问题 ，很好