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My name is XXX,male,26 years old, Graduated from XXXSchool, My major is automation.I am very happy to be a member of the XXX .I have four years of work experience, and have been engaged in electrical work. I'll work with the desire to do better, has the sense of responsibility,I will be dedicated in the future work, not afraid of difficulties, and in the work constantly learning knowledge, constantly improve themselves, I have the confidence to competent for this job.I am easy-going personality, approachable, treats people honesty, in the next life, I believe that I will work with colleagues harmonious , and happy to work with. Thank you very much!
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意思表达正确，逗族桐但是很多错穗高的。

I am xxx，山坦 male and 26 years old. I studied Automation Engineering as my major course in xxx University. I have been working on electrification for 4 years after graduation. I am of great desire for advace and responsibility， and I always do my best to solve difficulties in working. I enjoy learning in the work and improving myself at the same time. So I believe myself a best candidate for this position.
I am an easy-going and honest person. I can co-operate with my colleagues perfectly. I will be more than happy to join the team of xxx