Question

帮我检查一下英语作文有没有错误

检查一下语法或者单词用错什么的！
谢谢！！

There are three people in my family.They are my father,my mother and I.This is my father.He's an engineer.He's very smart.His favourite food is fish.This is my mother.She's a teacher.Her workplace is Beijing International School.She is kind and she's very active.She can sing very well.I'm a student.I'm 12 years old.I like singing and painting.My favourite colour is blue.
I love my family.

Answer 1

我觉得Her workplace is Beijing International School.换成
She works in Beijing International School.会好些吧，因为你这里面的句型都是一个样的，英语句型变化点吧，这样文章会好看些~~呵呵，纯属个人见解~~并且英语里面来些连接词也会使文章更加顺畅一点，譬如加点“and”"because""but"等等，呵呵，多看写原汁原味的英语文章吧，如果是应试就多看看英语作文，但是我非常不赞成~~~

Answer 2

没问题

Answer 3

米错