Question

请帮我看下.这句话有没有语法错误.

Ms.Zhou tell me. She is your deputy when you annual leave. So I tell her Mr.Wang's initialization password.

事情是这样的"有一个老外他负责他们部门的新员工申请,我一般是把电脑的初始化密码直接告诉他. 但是上周他休年假了,他们部门的一位女士给一个部门主管申请帐号,我把帐号建好后就直接发给了那位女士,当时那位女士说那个老外休年假了,老板让她先代替一下那个老外的工作.等这个老外今天回来,发现我没有把密码发给他,今天一早就发邮件问我.为什么把帐号和密码发给那个女士.
在这里我想表达的意思是, "周小姐告诉我,在你休年假的时候她是你的代理人.所以我把王先生的初始化密码告诉了她."
请高手帮忙给看看吧.谢谢谢谢.

Answer 1

时态错误，应改为一般过去时。只要把动词改一下就可以了。前两句间接引用不要标点。

Answer 2

这么说更简单有理，不要纠缠密码之类的问题，而是：老板说你不在时ZHO是代理：
Ms Zhou told me that her boss asked her to take care of your work while you were on vacation. She applied for this account and I gave it to her.

Answer 3

你应该把时态调整成过去时，因为这是已经发生了的事情。

Ms.Zhou told me that she was your deputy while you were on the annual leave. So I told her Mr.Wang's initializative password.

Answer 4

Ms Zhou told me that during your annual vacation, she is your representative. This is why I gave the password to her.

代理人<-- 不太好翻译， 所以用了representative （代表）

Answer 5

应该用过去式吧。
ms. zhou said that she was your deputy when you were annual leave.so i gave mr. wang's initialization password to her.