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高一英语短文改错,改十处

Sometimes,you get a teacher who not only brings learning to life, but make you believe in yourself and dream big. For me, that teacher was Ms.Gao. Before Ms.Gao, I had been accepted the idea that I was not the good writer. Math and science were my best subject,and in my mind,something could change that.But Ms.Gao proved us wrong. She taught me take risks in my writing and helps me uncover the stroyteller within me. Her influence in her students was not just within the classroom. She created a saft space which our opinions and dreams mattered

Answer 1

第二行：make 改为 makes 第五行：删除been 第六行：not 后的the 改为 a 第八行：subject 改为 subjects ; something 改为nothing 第十行： us 改为 me ； me 后面加 to 第十一行：helps 改为 helped 第十二行：in 改为 on 第十五行： which 改为 where

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Answer 2

第一行，if和in去掉第二行，notices改成noticed 第三行，any改成some，最后的the改成a 第四行，great改成greatly，after改成before 第五行，Sometime改成sometimes，the改成what 第六行，and改成but

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