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高分求助!!!英语高手麻烦帮忙翻译下，出国办签证用！

因为要去新西兰留学办签证，要向大使馆递交些材料，我自己又不是专业英语，也不太懂专业书面语，所以请这方面的专家帮忙翻译一下，翻译的好我追加高分，谢谢大家了！

翻译一：
工资证明
兹证明张三,在太原市XXXX工程监理有限公司工作,职位是业务主管，年工资是12万元。
特此证明
太原市XXXX工程监理有限公司
X年X月X日

翻译二：
新西兰驻中国大使馆：
我公司员工张三自费到新西兰进修英语一年,经董事会研究决定,同意其请假一年,望给预签证。
太原市XXXX工程监理有限公司
X年X月X日

Answer 1

给你提供最佳译文，望能辨别优劣。注意，根据英文习惯，信件的日期应放在右上方。目前在“张三”处暂用了“Mr. Zhang San”，如是女士可改成“Ms…”。祝你好运!

译件一：

Certification of Income

March 17, 2009
To Whom It May Concern,

This is to certify that Mr. Zhang San is Director of Operations at the XXXX Project Supervision Company Ltd., Taiyuan City. His annual salary of 120,000 RMB Yuan.

Project Supervision Company Ltd.
Taiyuan City, Shanxi Province, China

译件二：

New Zealand Embassy in China
March 17, 2009
Dear Sir or Madam,

Mr. Zhang San, an employee of this company, is going to New Zealand for English studies at his own expense. After discussion by the Board, the decision was made to grant him a one-year leave. We would be obliged if you could issue him a visa for this purpose.

Yours faithfully,

Project Supervision Company Ltd.
Taiyuan City, Shanxi Province, China

Answer 2

Translation 1:
Wages to prove
I certify that the San, in the City Project Management Ltd. XXXX job, jobs are business executives, the annual wage is 120,000 yuan.
Hereby certify that
Taiyuan Project Supervision XXXX Ltd.
X years X months X Day

Translation II:
New Zealand Embassy in China:
Zhang MY employees to improve the English language at their own expense to New Zealand for one year, research by the Board of Directors decided to leave its year, look to the pre-visa.
Taiyuan Project Supervision XXXX Ltd.
X years X months X Day

Answer 3

签证官只关心3个问题
第一：你出国的动机
第二:你的资金来源
第三:你出去后是否会回来
其他的你不用放在心上
我经常和他们去后海喝酒 很了解他们的习性

Answer 4

Proof of wages
This proof threes, engineering supervision in taiyuan XXXX, position Co., LTD is the competent business, annual salary is 12 million yuan.
Hereby certificate
Taiyuan XXXX project supervision company limited
X X X days in on
New Zealand embassy in China:
My company employees to study English at New Zealand Jones, the board decided to leave, and agree to the year, advance the visa.
Taiyuan XXXX project supervision company limited
X X X days in on
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Answer 5

lol...我也太原人，帮帮老乡~~

Translation 1
Proof of salary
This certifies that Zhangsan, has worked as a sales executive in XXXX Engineering Project Supervision Ltd. with an anual salary of 120,000RMB.
Hereby to certify.
Taiyuan XXXX Engineering Project Supervision Ltd.

Date/Month/Year

Translation2
To Chinese Embassy in New Zealand:

Zhangsan, an employee of my company, will go to New Zealand at his's own expense to pursue futher education in English for a period of one year. This decision was confirmed by the decision of the our company's board of directors, and approved for his job leave of one year. Look forward for his pre-visa.
Taiyuan XXXX Engineering Project Supervision Ltd.
Date/Month/Year

希望有帮助 :*)

Answer 6

第一个：
Certification of Employment and Income

This is hereby to certificate that Mr./Ms. Zhang San(DOB ID No. ) is currently under the employment of Taiyuan XXXX Project Supervison Co. Ltd. and posited Supervisor of marketing dept with the anual income of 120,000 RMB

第二个：

Dear Visa Officer,

Mr./Ms Zhang San (DOB ID No ), as the employee of our entity, has applied for an one-year vocation in order to finish his/her self-sporned English Proficiency Program in New Zealand and such application has been approved.

Any careful consideration and assistance of his/her visa application will be highly appreciated.

XXXXXX

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