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帮忙修改一下这篇英语演讲稿

这本来是一篇议论文，稍加修改可以让它变成一篇演讲稿。
除了首尾要添加一些口语之外，中间也要稍加改动。
改动的地方标注
今天之前改好我会追加到30或再多一些

During the Spring Festival, many students got a considerable sum of New Year Gift Money. What should we do with this money? Usually there are two alternatives: spend it or save it. Which is better? In my opinion, to save it is more sensible for us students.
First, thrift has long been our tradition virtue. Even in ancient times, our ancestors already knew from their experience that it was easy to go from frugality to extravagance but different to go from extravagance to frugality. Once students get into the habit of spending money extravagantly, he may find it very different to stop doing so, and he may keep buying things like clothes of famous brand, imported stationery, or most updated cell phones.
Second, saving money prepares us for rainy days. There is an old saying witch goes like this: “Human fortunes are as unpredictable as the weather.” It means that we students can never know what may happen to us next. One day we may be badly in need of money. If that happened, our savings can help us a lot and see us through the hard time.
On the other hand, spending may result in students’ unhealthy competition of wealth. Rich students with a lot of New Year Gift Money may spend extravagantly, buying all sorts of luxury goods, while students from poor families don’t even have proper meals. Due to vanity, some poor students may try to find ways to make money quickly. Sometimes they may even take the risk of breaking the law, or committing crimes.
Some people may argue that when money is deposited in a bank, it will lose its basic function. Actually, it will not. When our state Treasury lacks money, the money deposited in the bank may help our country overcome financial difficulties.
Saving money benefits not only the students themselves, but also our country. So we should start saving money now.

Answer 1

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My topic is New Year Gift Money. During the Spring Festival, many students got a considerable sum of New Year Gift Money. What should we do with this money? Usually there are two alternatives: spend it or save it. Which is better? In my opinion, to save it is more sensible for us students.
First of all,as we all know, thrift has long been our tradition virtue. Even in ancient times, our ancestors already knew from their experience that it was easy to go from frugality to extravagance but different to go from extravagance to frugality. Once students get into the habit of spending money extravagantly, he may find it very different to stop doing so, and he may keep buying things like clothes of famous brand, imported stationery, or most updated cell phones.
Secondly, saving money prepares us for rainy days. There is an old saying witch goes like this: “Human fortunes are as unpredictable as the weather.” It means that we students can never know what may happen to us next. One day we may be badly in need of money. If that happened, our savings can help us a lot and see us through the hard time.
On the other hand, spending may result in students’ unhealthy competition of wealth. Rich students with a lot of New Year Gift Money may spend extravagantly, buying all sorts of luxury goods, while students from poor families don’t even have proper meals. Due to vanity, some poor students may try to find ways to make money quickly. Sometimes they may even take the risk of breaking the law, or committing crimes.
Some people may argue that when money is deposited in a bank, it will lose its basic function. Actually, it will not. When our state Treasury lacks money, the money deposited in the bank may help our country overcome financial difficulties.
Saving money benefits not only the students themselves, but also our country. So we should start saving money now.
That's all. Thank you very much for listening.

Answer 2

在春天节日的时候，许多学生有了相当多量的新年礼物钱。 我们应该对这钱做什么? 通常有二替代选择: 花费它或解救它。 哪一是比较好的? 依我之见, 解救它对我们是更有感觉的学生。
首先，节约久已经是我们的传统德行。 甚至在远古的时代中，我们的祖先已经从他们的经验知道从节俭到奢侈去是容易的除了不同的之外从奢侈到节俭去。 一经学生奢侈地养成开支的习惯钱,他可能找停止这么做是非常不同的，而且他可能继续买像出名商标的衣服事物,输入了文具, 或大部分更新了行动电话。
其次，节省钱准备我们下雨的数天。 有一个老叙述巫婆像这一样去: "人类的财富是像天气一样的不可预知。"资讯科技意谓我们这些学生无法知道然后可能发生在我们身上的东西。 有一天我们可能严重地需要钱。 如果那发生, 我们的储蓄能帮助我们很多并且透过苦头见到我们。
另一方面，开支可能造成学生的财富不健康竞争。 由于许多新年礼物钱的富有学生可能奢侈地花费,买所有的奢侈货物,当来自贫穷的家庭学生甚至没有适当的一餐时候。 由于虚荣心，一些贫穷的学生可能试着找方法很快地赚钱。 有时他们可能甚至轮流打破法律的危险, 或判决罪行。
一些人可能争论，当钱在一个银行中被存放的时候,它将会失去它的基本功能。 实际上, 它将不会。当我们的州财政部缺乏钱的时候,在银行中被存放的钱可能帮助我们的国家克服财政的困难。
援救的钱有益不只有学生他们自己, 但是也我们的国家。 因此我们应该开始现在节省钱。