Question

谁能帮我看一下下面这个句子有语法错误吗？

I continuously believe that it will bring him good luck that a person's good deeds

Answer 1

你好，语法有错误，
原句是宾语从句，“that a person's good deeds”是多余的部分，根据句意把这部分替换it,多余的that去掉就可以了，即通顺有没语法错误。
更正：I continuously believe that a person' s good deeds will bring him good luck .
试译：我一直相信人的善举会有好报。（会带来好运）
分析句子成分：
主语：I
状语：continuously
谓语：believe
宾语从句：that a person's good deeds will bring him good luck (从句主语：a person's good deeds 谓语will bring 宾语 him 宾补good luck)
回答完毕，希望能帮到您！

Answer 2

这句话错在good luck 后面的that到句末不是个完整的句子。换句话说从开头到good luck 没有错。
I continuously believe that it will bring him good luck （我一直相信它会给他带来好运。）

追答

good luck 后你要表达什么，把汉语告诉我，好为你修改。

追问

我一直相信一个人的善心将会给他带来好运。

善行