Question

I take that you should rewrite the paper.单句改错，注明原因，翻译

Answer 1

I take it that you should rewrite the paper.
it 作形式宾语，从句作真正宾语，有些动词不可直接接that 从句，需要加上it/the fact 作为媒介。这些动词有：like, dislike, hate, see 看见， hear 听见， want 想要， take 认为, 等等。

翻译：我认为你应该重写一下这篇文章。