Question

谁能帮我翻译一下这个自荐信啊，急急～下午三点前～多谢。。

自荐信

尊敬的领导：
我很高兴能通过这份简历向您介绍和推荐我自己。
和所有应届毕业生一样，我也希望能有一片展现自己的天空，努力工作，成绩卓著，毕竟一份好的工作很难得。而一个好的单位也自然会把这个良机留给恰当的人才。但愿我们能在彼此的相互了解中实现这个目标。
从学校层面来讲，为了能早日成为一名全面发展的大学生，素质优良的社会人才，我积极投入到学习生活和实习工作中。在保证学习情况良好的前提下，我曾参加了校学生会的工作，使我开阔了眼界，丰富了知识，使我日趋成熟。并多次参加暑期实习，汲取了社会经验，拓宽了交际面，令我更加稳重。
从家庭层面来讲，父母都是企业职工，从他们身上，我学会了处事严谨，办事注重效率，认真负责的工作态度。这是能令我在以后的工作中受益匪浅的。而母亲和其他多位家族成员都从事银行、保险等金融行业，耳濡目染之下，也令我对金融行业有了一定程度上的了解，如果我能应聘成功，相信我能很快地融入到贵公司的工作机构中去。
作为一名即将毕业的大学生来说，我还需要更多的历练。而我也将继续努力学习并尽快适应新环境，尽我所能，用智慧、意志和勇气，为您的事业添砖加瓦！
此致
敬礼
不要金山快译的～～多谢。
你们都是金山快译的。。。
第一句，I'm啊。。哪里有说i happy的啊？没有谓语。。
“和所有应届毕业生一样，我也希望能有一片展现自己的天空”
这句金山快译翻得像鬼一样。。
Is same with all graduating students, I also hoped can have one piece to unfold own sky,

教英文的老师，写出这样的东西？不会吧？
这样不行啊 。。麻烦你们认真帮我翻译一下好么？我没有能力才让你们帮忙的。
如果都是金山快译，我发到这里来还有什么意义啊？

Answer 1

尊敬的领导：
我很高兴能通过这份简历向您介绍和推荐我自己。
I'm happy to introduce myself to you though this profile.
和所有应届毕业生一样，我也希望能有一片展现自己的天空，努力工作，成绩
As many other graduaters,I hope very much to have my own sky to show myself to others.If so,I will work hard.
卓著，毕竟一份好的工作很难得。而一个好的单位也自然会把这个良机留给 恰当的人才。After all, a good work is very precious.And it is naturally considered that a good company will give it to the person who is fit for it.但愿我们能在彼此的相互了解中实现这个目标。 I wish that we will reach that goal together
从学校层面来讲，为了能早日成为一名全面发展的大学生，素质优良的社会人才，我积极投入到学习生活和实习工作中 In order to become a .....
在保证学习情况良好的前提下，我曾参加了校学生会的工作，使我开阔了眼界，丰富了知识，使我日趋成熟。并多次参加暑期实习，汲取了社会经验，拓宽了交际面，令我更加稳重。
从家庭层面来讲，父母都是企业职工，从他们身上，我学会了处事严谨，办事注重效率，认真负责的工作态度。这是能令我在以后的工作中受益匪浅的。而母亲和其他多位家族成员都从事银行、保险等金融行业，耳濡目染之下，也令我对金融行业有了一定程度上的了解，如果我能应聘成功，相信我能很快地融入到贵公司的工作机构中去。
作为一名即将毕业的大学生来说，我还需要更多的历练。而我也将继续努力学习并尽快适应新环境，尽我所能，用智慧、意志和勇气，为您的事业添砖加瓦！
此致
敬礼

啊```受不了了 吃饭了 ```
大哥 我高中生 帮你翻译弄得我头痛死了````你看着办吧````

Answer 2

原文汉语有几处有一点小小的问题。一下译文是在对原文稍有修改的基础上完成的。很多地方没什么问题，但是如果直译的话显得及其不符合英语习惯，比如“尊敬的领导”......
Dear sir，
It is a great honor for me to present you my resume and recommend myself.
Like all other graduates, I also dream to have the chance to demonstrate my abilities, to work hard and achieve great success. And I know it not easy to get a good job, and a good company will naturally grant the golden opportunity to the appropriate talent. I do hope we will be able to know each better and achieve our respective aims.
As far as my university life is concerned, I have tried with enthusiasm to engage myself in studying and practice in order to become an all-round student and a high-quality citizen in future.
I managed to keep an excellent academic performance and served in student union, which broadened my horizon , enriched my knowledge and added to my maturity. During the summer vacations, I did several kinds of different part-time jobs so I learned a lot about the society and improved my communication ability. All this made me all the more steady and reliable.
As for my family, both my parents are workers. From them I learned to do everything precisely, efficiently and conscientiously, from which I will certain benefit a lot when I begin to work. My mother and several other family members are all engaged in the profession connected with finance such banks and insurance companies. Such professional influence enabled me to have a fair amount of knowledge about finance industry. If I can be employed, I am certain I can become a competent employer in your company in no time.
As a student who will graduate soon, I still need more experience, and I will continue to strive to learn more in order to adjust myself to new environment. I hope I can demonstrate my abilities to contribute to your company, with my wisdom, my willpower, and my courage.
Thanks!
Truly yours,
*****

祝你成功并早日买一台私用点钞机！

Answer 3

Honorific leadership:
I am very happy to pass this resume toward you to introduce and recommend myself.
Similar to all graduating students, I also hope to have the one display own sky, working hard, result 卓著 , after all a good work is very rare.And a good unit's ising also natural will leave this good opportunity to the fitting talented person.Only wish we can carry out this target in each other mutually the understanding.
Speaking from school level, for canning become an university student who develops completely soon, character good social talented person, I throw in the study life and the practice work actively.While promising the study in good shape premise, I once attended the work of school student association, making me spacious range of experience, enriched knowledge, make me be gradually maturing.Attend for many times also to practice in summer vacation, drew to take social experience, opened widely social intercourse noodles, make me more steady heavy.
Speaking from family level, all of parents are business enterprises officers and workers, from their body, I mastered to deal with affairs careful, handle affairs to pay attention to an efficiency, hard be responsible for of work attitude.This is can make I be subjected to benefit bandit in laterly of the work shallow.And the mother all be engaged in the financial profession of the bank, insurance...etc. with several other household members, becoming familiar with under, also make me have the understanding of[with] certain degree to the financial profession, if I can accept appointment success, believe I can integrate to go to the work organization of your company very soon.
Is an university student who will soon graduate to say, I still need more experience and training.And I will also continue to study hard and adapt new surrounding as soon as possible, exert me the ability, use intelligence, will and courage, add brick to add tile for your business!
This with the result that
Salute

Answer 4

Respect leadership:
I very happy can through this resume to you introduce and recommend me.
Is same with all graduating students, I also hoped can have one piece to unfold own sky, works diligently, the result is outstanding, a good work very is after all rare. But a good unit also naturally can leave this good opportunity the appropriate talented person. Hopes us to be able to achieve this goal in each other mutual understanding.
As for the school stratification plane, in order to will be able soon to become a full scale development the university student, the quality fine society talented people, I will invest positively to the study live and practise in the work. Under the guarantee study situation good premise, I once started the school student association's work, made me to widen the field of vision, has enriched the knowledge, caused me to be day by day mature. And participated in the summer to practise many times, has derived the social experience, has opened up the human relations surface, made me to be steadier.
As for the family stratification plane, the parents all are the enterprise staff, from their body, I learned to handle matters rigorously, management attention efficiency, earnest responsible work manner. This is can make me to benefit greatly in later work. But the mother and other multi-family members all is engaged in financial professions and so on the bank, insurance under, is influenced by what one sees and hears, also made me to have in certain degree understanding to the financial profession, if I could respond to a call for recruits successfully, believed I could integrate very quickly to in your firm's operating mechanism.
The university student soon graduates who as one, my also need more informed and experienced. But I will also continue to try hard the study and adapt to the new circumstances as soon as possible, I energy, with the wisdom, the will and the courage, will contribute labor and materials for yours enterprise!
I herewith offer
salute

Answer 5

我是教英文的老师
Dear respect leadership:
I very happy can through this resume to you introduce and recommend me.
Is same with all graduating students, I also hoped can have one piece to unfold own sky, works diligently, the result is outstanding, a good work very is after all rare. But a good unit also naturally can leave this good opportunity the appropriate talented person. Hopes us to be able to achieve this goal in each other mutual understanding.
As for the school stratification plane, in order to will be able soon to become a full scale development the university student, the quality fine society talented people, I will invest positively to the study live and practise in the work. Under the guarantee study situation good premise, I once started the school student association's work, made me to widen the field of vision, has enriched the knowledge, caused me to be day by day mature. And participated in the summer to practise many times, has derived the social experience, has opened up the human relations surface, made me to be steadier.
As for the family stratification plane, the parents all are the enterprise staff, from their body, I learned to handle matters rigorously, management attention efficiency, earnest responsible work manner. This is can make me to benefit greatly in later work. But the mother and other multi-family members all is engaged in financial professions and so on the bank, insurance under, is influenced by what one sees and hears, also made me to have in certain degree understanding to the financial profession, if I could respond to a call for recruits successfully, believed I could integrate very quickly to in your firm's operating mechanism.
The university student soon graduates who as one, my also need more informed and experienced. But I will also continue to try hard the study and adapt to the new circumstances as soon as possible, I energy, with the wisdom, the will and the courage, will contribute labor and materials for yours enterprise!
I herewith offer
salute