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汉译英 一首中文诗 谢谢 翻译的好的还有加分

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我没有看过冬天的海。
所以你就算在电话里怎么和我描述，我都没有办法想象。
你为什么就是不说，下次我们一起去看呢？
现在 我真的看到了 可是..............
我一个人站在空旷的海岸边 看着潮水一遍一遍的冲刷着沙滩
想在沙滩上用手画一个心型 可是 每次画到一半 都被海浪冲刷掉了
终于 用尽力气 挖了一道深深的沟渠 阻挡住海水 我又用手画了一个心形 挖的很深 很深
然后看着这个心形又慢慢地被海水一点一点冲刷掉 等到完全消失的时候
一滴液体从我硕大的墨镜后面顺着脸颊留下来 掉进海水里
我回过头 离开了海岸
这次 我真的看到冬天的海了 真的
想起普希金说过：那个把你称作爱人的人是何等的幸福啊
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用的单词尽量简单 然后翻译的流畅 可以适当的修改 （但请告诉我修改的地方 我注意下）不会有让人听着很别扭的地方 比如那个“硕大的墨镜”翻译成big xx就不好了 呵呵 要求有点多 但是翻译好的话有加分哦 谢谢啦

Answer 1

我没有看过冬天的海。
I have never seen the sea in winter
所以你就算在电话里怎么和我描述，我都没有办法想象。
So I can not imagine it no matter you how to describe in phone.
你为什么就是不说，下次我们一起去看呢？
Why not to say that we go to see it together next time?
现在 我真的看到了 可是..............
Now I have truely seen it, but…
我一个人站在空旷的海岸边 看着潮水一遍一遍的冲刷着沙滩
It is a single me who standing on the open beach saw the tide washing the dessert again and again.
想在沙滩上用手画一个心型 可是 每次画到一半 都被海浪冲刷掉了
I wanted to draw a heart on dessert, but it was always rubbed by tide before complete
终于 用尽力气 挖了一道深深的沟渠 阻挡住海水 我又用手画了一个心形 挖的很深 很深
Finally, I dig a deep gap to resist the tide which made me worn. I once again drew a very and very deep heart .
然后看着这个心形又慢慢地被海水一点一点冲刷掉 等到完全消失的时候
Then I watched the heart eroded by seawater little by little until it disappeared.
一滴液体从我硕大的墨镜后面顺着脸颊留下来 掉进海水里
A drop of tear down from my cheek behind the big sunglasses and fell into the sea.
我回过头 离开了海岸
I turned back and left from the beach.
这次 我真的看到冬天的海了 真的
This time I have seen the sea in winter really.
想起普希金说过：那个把你称作爱人的人是何等的幸福啊
I could not help to think of the words Pushkin said “how happy the man who calls you lover are!”

我的自己翻译的，句子也没有什么问题，希采纳！

Answer 2

I haven't seen the sea in winter
so that I can't image it whatever how you describe it to me in the phone
why you never to say we can go to see it together next time?

Now ,I really saw it...But...

I stand by the lonely beach alone
seeing the tide washing the beach again and again

I wander to print a heart on the beach by my hand. but everytime when I printed at half, it was washed by tide.

Finally,I try my best hug a deepest gully prevent the water from sea
I finally printed a heart by my hand.
hug deeper and deeper
Then seeing the heart be washed away slowly by the water
when it disappeared abosolutly
A dip of liquid fell down the face behind my sad sun glasses
fell in the sea

I turned around
left the beach

This time
I saw the sea in winter
really

Pushkin said that how happiness the person is who called you as his lover！

自己帮你翻译的~也不知道对不对~
不过应该也差不多吧！！
仅供参考~呵呵~

Answer 3

I have not seen the sea in the winter.
So even if you on the phone with me, I can't imagine.
Why is not said, next time we go?
Now I really saw but . ... ..
I stand in the open coast watch tide over

away by the waves was finally fully dug deep ditch blocked seawater I drew a heart-shaped hand dug a deep deep
and then watch this heart-shaped and slowly by seawater and washed away bit by bit until completely disappear
when a drop of liquid from my huge sunglasses back down the cheek to stay off into the water
I back left coast
this time I really see winter sea really
think of Pushkin said: that you called love very happy!

Answer 4

我从来都没有看过冬天的海。
I've never seen the sea in winter.
所以你就算你怎么和我描述在电话里，我都没有办法想象。
So no matter how you describe on the phone,Is no way I imagined.
为什么你就是不说，下次我们一起去看看呢？
Why don't you say, next time we went to see it?
现在，我已经看到了，可是。。。
Now, I've seen, but ..
我一个人站在寂寞的海岸边,看着潮水一遍一遍的冲刷着沙滩
I stand by the lonely beach alone，watch over and over again scouring the beach tide
想用我的手指在沙滩上画一个心型，可是
Want to use my finger to draw a heart on the beach，however，

我没办法帮你翻译了，太多修饰手法，英语没有中文那么多形容词！真是受不了你，我翻译了一半，有些没有办法按照你的本义去翻译，所以我用中文另外标注了！仅供参考！

Answer 5

I haven't seen the sea in winter
so that I can't image it whatever how you describe it to me in the phone
why you never to say we can go to see it together next time?

Now ,I really saw it...But...

I stand by the lonely beach alone
seeing the tide washing the beach again and again

I wander to print a heart on the beach by my hand. but everytime when I printed at half, it was washed by tide.

Finally,I try my best hug a deepest gully prevent the water from sea
I finally printed a heart by my hand.
hug deeper and deeper
Then seeing the heart be washed away slowly by the water
when it disappeared abosolutly
A dip of liquid fell down the face behind my sad sun glasses
fell in the sea

I turned around
left the beach

This time
I saw the sea in winter
really

Pushkin said that how happiness the person is who called you as his lover！