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With the continuous development of science and technology, the computer used in various fields, and to people's lives has brought great convenience. This article is a passenger ticketing system, passenger transport companies in order to be convenient for daily management.
Based on network passenger ticketing system is a typical of the MIS, is a passenger transport companies Daily adapt ticket work the acute demand for management of the design and development of software systems, the development mainly include database establishment and maintenance and proscenium application program The development of the two, in the system requirements based on the analysis design and implementation of the basic information of input and management, ticketing information Add, modify, delete, and inquiry functions.
Passenger ticketing system is not an integral part of Passenger Transport Company, its content of passenger company managers and co-workers is critical, so Yi passenger ticketing system should provide users with sufficient information and efficient query means. But it has been the use of traditional manual approaches to ticket sales, which management exist Zhao several flaws such as: managing more Complex, then over time, will generate a lot of documents and data, which for find out, updating and maintenance have brought a lot of difficulties.
Ferry passenger ticketing system is a indispensable part of the company in many countries has been widely studied and applied. Overall, passenger ticketing system is through the centralized ticketing information, the company's management control. Ticket management system to achieve the modernization of the fundamental way is to make the asset information and systematic. The management system described in detail with Visual C # 2005 and SQL Server 2005 as a tool for the process of developing information management systems. System uses the latest Microsoft ADO.NET database access technology to achieve the foreground application and the background connection to the database, complete the system structure and the close integration of real life.

Answer 1

随着科学技术的不断发展，计算机应用于各大领域，并给人们的生活带来了极大的便利。本文介绍的是一个客运售票系统，为了使客运公司的日常管理工作得到方便。
Along with the sustainable development of science and technology, the computer is applying in various fields, and it has been bringing utmost convenience to modern society, especially for peoples live.
This article is introduced a state-of-art Passenger Ticketing System, in order to facilitate the daily management of Passenger Transportation Companies.

基于网络的客运售票系统是一个典型的管理信息系统，是一个为适应对客运公司日常售票工作进行管理的迫切需求而设计开发的软件系统，其开发主要包括后台数据库的建立和维护以及前端应用程序的开发两个方面，在系统需求分析的基础上设计并实现了基本信息的录入和管理、售票信息的添加、修改、删除和查询等功能。
As a typical MIS (Management Information System), the Passenger Ticketing System is building up based on network, as a developed software system in order to meet the highly demanding requirements for ordinary management of Passenger Transportation Company, the developing process is constructed by two steps, namely, the establishment and maintenance of back-end database, and the development of front-end application programs. The system is fulfilled the multifunction which updated on basis of system analysis ,including of input of basic data, adding, editing and deleting and on-line checking of information of management and ticket selling.

客运售票系统是一个客运公司不可缺少的部分,它的内容对于客运公司的管理者和工作人员来说都至关重要,所以客运售票系统应该能够为用户提供充足的信息和快捷的查询手段。但一直以来人们使用传统人工的方式来进行售票，这种管理方式存在着许多缺点,如:效率低、管理比较复杂,另外时间一长,将产生大量的文件和数据,这对于查找、更新和维护都带来了不少的困难。
As an indispensable method of management for Passenger Transportation Company, all contents of Passenger Ticketing System is quite critical and be capable of providing sufficient information and swift inquiring measures.
Manual ticket selling, as the traditional method with the various deficiencies, such as, low efficiency, troublesome management, and will create a lot of difficulties for data update and related maintenances.

客运售票系统是一个客运公司不可缺少的部分，在许多国家得到了广泛的研究与应用。总的说来，客运售票系统就是通过集中票务信息，对公司的管理进行调控。实现售票管理系统现代化的根本途径就是使资产信息化、系统化。
As a systematic managing method, the Passenger Ticketing System has been wildly applying in a number of countries.
Generally speaking, the regulation and control of Passenger Transportation Company will be used the management of integrated ticket information, in order to meet the management system of ticket selling to be modernized, property informationlised and systematic.
本管理系统详细介绍了以Visual C# 2005和SQL Server 2005为工具开发信息管理系统的过程。系统采用Microsoft最新的ADO.NET数据库访问技术来实现前台应用程序与后台数据库的连接，完成了系统结构与现实生活的紧密结合。
The management system is explicitly introduced the developing process of information management system which building up based on the Visual C# 2005 and SQL Server 2005. By means of the Microsoft latest ADO.NET database access technology, the system is achieved the connection and interlinking transport between the back-end database front-end application programs, and reach the goal of close combination of system structure and real life.

Answer 2

With the continuous development of science and technology, 【the computer has been used in more and more fields, and has brought great convenience people's everyday life.】 【This article talks about a passenger ticketing system, by which passenger transport companies can use to be improve their daily management.】

【Based on the network passenger ticketing system, and also a typical of the MIS, a passenger transport company can use the system to daily adapt their ticket work to the accurate demand for customers as well as the management of design and development of software systems.】【 Development for the software system mainly includes database establishment and maintenance of the background application programs.】【 The development of the two, for the system requirements based on the analysis design and implementation of the basic information of input and management, ticketing information requires the Add, Modify, Delete, and Inquiry functions.】

Passenger ticketing system is not an integral part of Passenger Transport Company, but its role of passenger management for the company and co-workers is critical, so the passenger ticketing system should provide users with sufficient information and efficient query means. It has been the a long time to use traditional manual approaches for ticket sales, in which management is inefficient with several flaws such as: complexed daily management, work over time, a lot of documents and data, searching for particular information, and updating and maintenance has also brought in a lot of difficulties.】

【Ferry passenger ticketing system is an indispensable part of the company in many countries and has been widely studied and applied. 】【Overall, passenger ticketing system functions through the centralized ticketing information, and the company's management control. Ticket management system aims to achieve the modernization of the fundamental operation and to make the asset information systematic. 】【The management system is described in details with Visual C # 2005 and SQL Server 2005 as a tool for the process of developing information management systems. 】【The System uses the latest Microsoft ADO.NET database and Access technology to achieve the foreground application and the background connection to the database, and to complete the system structure for a close integration of real life. 】

Answer 3

楼主，你好，你的文章好像是中文直接用翻译工具翻译过来的，

即使改了，也无法使用。