Question

我写了一篇英语作文，帮我修改一下好吗？ 非常感谢你！

Everyone Needs Help
Everyone should learn to help. And I have ever got help from others. If other people are in trouble, I'll try my best to help them as in return. After my help, I felt very happy. I do beheve that help others can keep friendship longer. Therefore, everyone need help. If we always do someone in trouble a favour, the world will be more beautiful.

Answer 1

Everyone should learn how to help others. And I have been helped from others before. And if other people are in trouble, I'll try my best to help them as in return. This is because after that, I will fell very happy. I do beheve that help others can keep friendship longer. Therefore, everyone needs help. If we always help someone who is in trouble, the world will be more beautiful. 改了，你仔细看看，这样更通顺了，也没语法错误了。

Answer 2

意思时态全拧了， 中式英语, 很难看懂。
behave 是行为举止， 这里不能这么用

Helping others is a good virtue.
Everyone should learn how to help others. I have ever been helped from others for many years, in return, I will try my best to help others who are in trouble. The reason is I feel very happy after I have helped others. I do this because I believe helping others can keep our friendship longer. That's why everyone should help others. If we always help whoever is in difficulty, the world will be more beautiful.