Question

请你们看看我自己写的这篇英语作文有没有什么地方错了，如果有，请你帮我改正，我正读初一，不会英语！

这里的.是提示内容：1.我家有4口人。有爸爸.妈妈.姐姐和我。2.我爸是警察，他喜欢他的工作，他的工作很危险，但很有趣。3.我妈是护士，我帮助病人(patients）和医生。4.我和姐姐都在第4中学（NO.4Middle School）学习，我们学习很努力，我要像爸爸一样成为一名警察。
自己写的： My Family
My family have four man。have father.mother.sisther and I 。My father is a policeman ，he like his work 。his work is kind of dangerous ，but very interesting 。My mother is a nurse，she help patients and doctors。I am sister is in NO.4Middle School studies，we studies very hard，I want to like father be a policeman。

Answer 1

1.My family have four man改成 My family has four members family 在作为整体时是单数，即译为家庭时是单数，译为家庭成员时为复数。 man 这里是人的意思，但是此处应该为复数，men，建议改成member 成员更好。
2.have father.mother.sisther and I 改成namely,my father ,mother,sister and I .要知道一个完整的句子最起码要包含主语跟谓语动词。namely即，也就是 ，这一句与前句合并也可改成My family has four members and includes my father ,mother,sister and me. I 在这句中就改成宾格了，因为在谓语动词后面.
3.he like his work 改成he likes his work .he是第三人称单数,like 也应该相应转换成第三人称单数形式
4.she help patients and doctors改为she helps patients and doctors，she是第三人称单数形式，与he 一样。不过这句可以改成she helps look after ( 照顾)patients and assists（协助）doctors.用she helps patients and doctors也行的
5.I am sister is in NO.4Middle School studies改为My sister and I study in NO.4Middle School. 注意英语翻译中不要直译，首先要找到主语和谓语动词，study就是谓语动词。而且一般谈到几个人中有自己时，往往要把自己放在后面说，出于礼貌。I 应该放在后面说。
6.we studies very hard改为We study very hard .we 是第一人称而且不是一个人，study 不用改单数形式。动词用复数形式的情况I We You They 名词的复数形式teahers students flowers 等等，单数情况he she it 以及名词单数 boy girl box 等等。
7.I want to like father be a policeman.改为I want to be a policeman like my father. like father 放在句尾好一些。
慢慢来，一点一点积累这方面知识，建议你备一本错题集,把所有的错误记在本子上，这样以后碰到类似情况就容易解决了。

Answer 2

There are four members in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a policeman. His work is kind of dangerous, but very interesting too. My mother is a nurse. She helps patients and doctors. My sister and I both study in No. 4 Middle School. We work very hard. I want to become a policeman just like my father in the future.

Answer 3

There are four members my family, my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a policeman. His work is kind of dangerous, but very interesting too. My mother is a nurse. She helps patients and doctors. My sister and I both study in No. 4 Middle School. We work very hard. I

Answer 4

我修改如下：
My Family
My family has four men-father, mother, sisther and I .My father is a policeman. He likes his work . His work is dangerous ，but very interesting .My mother is a nurse. she helps patients and cooperates with doctors. My sister studies in NO.4Middle School. We study very hard. I want to be a policeman like my father.

Answer 5

英语的句号是一点 ...
My family have four man。 There are four people in my family. 这句你最好用there be
have father.mother.sisther and I 。They are my father,my mother, my sister and I . 英语要强调物主代词。
My father is a policeman ，he like his work 。这句不错，但是he likes 第三人称单数
his work is kind of dangerous ，but very interesting 。这句完全对！
My mother is a nurse，she help patients and doctors。 she helps同一个道理
I am sister is in NO.4Middle School studies， my sister studies in No.4 .....简单句一般只有一个动词谓语
we studies very hard， we study very hard. 我们不用动词三单
I want to like father be a policeman. I want to be a policeman when I grow up like my father.
最后一句是中国式的英语。 句子的顺序不能对照中文逐字逐句翻译。 多多念课文吧！！！

Answer 6

仅供参考：
There are four persons in my family：my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a policeman, and he likes his job. It is kind of dangerous but very interesting. My mother is a nurse. She helps patients and doctors. My sister and I are students of No. 4 Middle School, and we both study very hard. I want to follow my father's footsteps to become a policeman.