Question

麻烦你们哪位帮我修改一下这篇英文作文,谢谢!

I Love My Homeland —HaiNan

I Love My Homeland —HaiNan, which lies in the south of China. She is surrounded by the sea. She has fresh air, which can make you relaxed. She is a beautiful heaven that attract many visitors from all over the world every year.
At present, it is a good chance for Hainan to construct an international tourism island. However, it is not easy to complete this task. In my opinion, we should devote ourselves to this great construction.
First, we should be polite when we are talking to others. What’s more we should help others to complete their work that they want to do. Second, it is also everyone’s duty to love trees and grass, so we should pay more attention to their growth. Of course, it is very important for us to learn English well. Because only in this way can we talk with foreigners fluently. In particularly, we can introduce our local cultures to foreigners in English. Last but not least, with the time goes by, our environment becomes worse. So we should protect our environment from being destroyed again. As a student, we can’t throw the rubbish anywhere. On the contrary, we should pick it up when we see it.
From now on, I will try my best to construct our beautiful homeland. I believe the future of Hainan will become better and better.

Answer 1

以下是我改好的，希望能帮到你。

My Homeland —HaiNan (题目怪怪的，因为你不是在介绍你的家乡，而是你在讲怎样建设海南和保护海南）
I love my homeland where is known as Hainan in the south of China. It is surrounded by the sea with fresh air which can make you feel relaxed. It is a beautiful heaven that attract many visitors all over the world every year.
At present, it is a good chance for Hainan to construct an international tourism island; however, it is not easy to complete this task. In my opinion, every Chinese should devote ourselves to this great construction.
First, we should be polite when we are talking to others. Besides, we should help others to complete their works that they want to do. Second, it is also everyone’s duty to love trees and grass, as we should pay more attention to their growth. Of course, it is very important for us to learn English, because only in this way can we talk with foreigners fluently. In particularly, we can introduce our local cultures and traditions to foreigners in English. Last but not least, with the time goes by, our environment becomes worse and so we should protect our environment from being destroyed again. As a student, we can’t throw the rubbish anywhere because it is very immoral. On the contrary, we should pick it up when we see it to enhance our home.
From now on, I will try my best to construct our beautiful homeland. I believe the future of Hainan will become better and better.

Answer 2

最好找老外润色.

追问

说得很有道理。谢谢！

追答

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