Question

短文改错 为什么最后on(去掉on)

Climbing is my favourite sport.I am very fond（这里加of） it,
especially in late autumn.One day,on the early morning my (此行正确)
friends and I put on our sports shoes and start(改为started) off.After
climb(改为climbing) for half an hour,we got to the top of the mountain.
There we had a very good view miles around.To（改为In） the north,
a big river runs cross the city.There are(改为were) many ships
sail（改为sailing） busily.A lot of beautiful trees are there,too.
The sun startes(这里改为started) to go down,for(改为so) it was time for us
to go home.On our road（改成way） back,we were laughing and
talking all the time.We had a good time on(去掉on) that day

为什么最后on(去掉on)？

Answer 1

Climbing is my favourite sport.I am very fond（这里加of,是因为fond of 是一个固定词组，是喜欢和喜爱的意思） it,
especially in late autumn.One day,on the early morning my (此行正确)
friends and I put on our sports shoes and start(改为started，是因为表达的是过去时态) off.After
climb(改为climbing就变成了动名词) for half an hour,we got to the top of the mountain.
There we had a very good view miles around.To（改为In表示方位，而to是表示方向的） the north,
a big river runs cross the city.There are(改为were表示的是过去时态) many ships
sail（改为sailing就成了动名词，作ship的补语） busily.A lot of beautiful trees are there,too.
The sun startes(这里改为started表示过去时态) to go down,for(改为so表示原因，是因为的意思，若用for,则表示目的，) it was time for us
to go home.On our road（改成way表示在途中，way 虽然有道路的意思，但说的是路途，而不是道路，想一想，若用our road,那条道路是你们的吗？） back,we were laughing and
talking all the time.We had a good time on(去掉on，this day或that day 在句中作时间状语时，是不带介词的) that day

不知满意否，仅供参考

Answer 2

你好！我的译文如下：
dear alice,
i have just got some good news to tell you. i "won" the national prize for painting last week. my father
was so "pleased" that he suggested "me going" to england for a holiday. i'd like to stay there for a half
month, visiting the places interested and practising my english as well. we've been writing to each for
about one year now. i have often dreamed of talking face to face with you. i imagine you 'll be on
vacation that time. perhaps we shall go out doing some sightseeing together.

Answer 3

have a good time意思为：过的很开心/玩得很开心。固定短语。

Answer 4

时间,如同today, the day before yesterday(after tomorrow),
this morning, that night, this year, that summer等等.你觉得需要冠词么?

Answer 5

为什么要on?不是很不通顺吗？