英语帝进来，看看这一段有什么语法错误啊。``````
Hi！everyone。WelcometoChina!Welcometomyhometown!mynameisXXXX。Iamafourteen-year-oldstud...
Hi！everyone。Welcome to China! Welcome to my hometown !my name is XXXX。I am a fourteen-year-old student from XXXXX Junior middle school .XXXX is my hometown ,of course ,I love here .Here is a good place to visit . I hope you’re enjoying your stay here .Finally I think I can know more about the US in this activity.
我又重写，看看怎么样
Hi!everybody,welcome to my hometown Yuexi.My name is Cheng Liuli.Now I am fourteen from Tiantang junior high school,I am just a junior student there.
Yuexi is not only a country with a long history,but it is a good place to have a trip.I love here and I think you will also love it.I wish everybody of you will enjoy yourself and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship as return. 展开
我又重写，看看怎么样
Hi!everybody,welcome to my hometown Yuexi.My name is Cheng Liuli.Now I am fourteen from Tiantang junior high school,I am just a junior student there.
Yuexi is not only a country with a long history,but it is a good place to have a trip.I love here and I think you will also love it.I wish everybody of you will enjoy yourself and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship as return. 展开
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