Question

英语帝进来，看看这一段有什么语法错误啊。``````

Hi！everyone。Welcome to China! Welcome to my hometown !my name is XXXX。I am a fourteen-year-old student from XXXXX Junior middle school .XXXX is my hometown ,of course ,I love here .Here is a good place to visit . I hope you’re enjoying your stay here .Finally I think I can know more about the US in this activity.
我又重写，看看怎么样
Hi!everybody,welcome to my hometown Yuexi.My name is Cheng Liuli.Now I am fourteen from Tiantang junior high school,I am just a junior student there.
Yuexi is not only a country with a long history,but it is a good place to have a trip.I love here and I think you will also love it.I wish everybody of you will enjoy yourself and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship as return.

Answer 1

I love here .中here是地点副词，i love后面应该加名词或代词，名词短语等做宾语，用it代指my hometown
Here is a good place to visit 同理，这是一个强调句：it is+st\adj\adv+to do sth 强调这是一个游览的好地方
I hope you’re enjoying your stay here 这个句子应该改为i hope you will enjoy youself at there (enjoy youself是玩得开心的意思）或i hope you will enjoy staying here(enjoy+doing sth)

Answer 2

Hi, everyone! Welcome to China! Welcome to my hometown ! my name is XXXX. I am a student from XXXXX Junior school, fourteen-year-old. XXXX is my hometown and I love here. Here is a good place for visit. I hope all of you have a great time here. Also I hope I can know more about the US in this activity.

Answer 3

1,Junior middle school 改为Junior high school.
2,Finally I think I can know more about the US in this activity改为 And I think I will know more about the US as well in this activity.

Answer 4

It is a good place here to visit

Answer 5

没有语法错误，就是有点罗嗦