Question

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I would like to tell you a story of my travel . My sister and I drove out to play.On the road, I saw someone in front of the field throwing rind.
When we got there, we enioied in the beautiful scenery, To my surprise some people threw litters on the ground, and litter bins in a nearby.
Last year, to museums, it said "do not take pictures," but some people secretly take photos by mobile phones.

I think we should abide by the rules. The Olympic Games are more than 200 days should be held in Beijing, we should be a quality of the people is to change some foreigners of Chinese people an opinion.China will present the best of her to the world in the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.

Answer 1

1.drove out to play——drove out to playing
On the road——On the trip
we enioied the beautiful scenery
onto the ground
took photos
2.The Olympic Games will be held near 200 days in Beijing.we should be a quality of the people to change the foreigners' opinions of Chinese people.
China will present her best to the world in the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.

Answer 2

I would like to tell you a story about my travel . My sister and I drove out to play.On the road, I saw someone in front of the field throwing rind.
When we got there, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, To my surprise someone threw litter on the ground, while the bin stood not far away.
Last year, in the museums, it said "do not take pictures," but some people still secretly take photos by mobile phones.

I think we should obey the rules. The Olympic Games should be held in Beijing in more than 200days, we should be a citizen with high quality so that we can change the foreigners' opinions towads Chinese people .China will present the best of aspect to the world in the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.