Question

请求高手帮忙看看这封英文信（写给签证官的）

Dear Visa Officer:

Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. My name is xxx，I am an educated and skilled individual who has applied for studying for master's degree in Norway.

My school demand that I should attend the introductory course which for new students in xx月xx日.Thereby I should arrive in Norway in x x年xx日.I earnestly beg you to verify my visa as soon as possible.

your sincerely,
帮忙看看这封信，有什么问题吗？结尾还要加些什么吗？总觉得不够礼貌。

Answer 1

在原来的基础上改了一些明显的小语病，最后最好不要祈求，而是殷切希望，希望对你有用。

Dear Visa Officer:

Thank you for taking time to read this letter. My name is xxx，I am an educated and skilled individual who has applied for Master's degree in Norway.

My professor demands that I should attend the introductory course which is arranged for new students on xx月xx日. Thereby I should arrive in Norway on x x年xx日. I earnestly hope that you could verify my visa as soon as possible. Your timely verification would be highly appreciated.

your sincerely,

Answer 2

Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. My name is XXX, I am an educated and skilled people, and pursuing a master's degree in Norway.

Schools have asked for a new school term, I should xxx on xxx day, to participate in introductory courses. Therefore, I should be in section XX No. XX arrived in Norway. I sincerely request that you as soon as possible to verify my visa.

Thank you very much

这样就够了