Question

求翻译!不要直译，高手请进~高分等待~

帮朋友求的翻译，
貌似是首歌，如果翻译时能注意下押韵就更好了，
不要直译，要翻译的文艺化些，总之，尽力吧，谢谢，
我会负责修改的，好的话就加分，多加都ok~
好，下面是正文：

五年前，从我见到你的那一刻起。
我爱上了你，爱的那样无法自拔。
仿佛你才是我的世界。
我把你融入了我的生命。
我对你的爱，充满了身体的每一个细胞，每一滴血液。
从来没有人像我这样爱你。
你感觉到了吗?
我的真心，你感受到了吗?
我对你的爱是那么的强烈。
可我知道，我们没有未来，我们没有明天。
你为什么不爱我？
噢 当你离开的那个时候。
我想紧紧帮你抱住，可是我没有。
我的勇气都被你的冷漠赶走了。
我是那么的爱你，可是让我深爱的你，却让我如此的伤心。
我见不到你，我仿佛快要死了。
只有你的爱，能将我唤醒。
然后，你在哪里？

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刚刚我又看了下这个，不是太难翻译，
你们应该可以的哈，主要是要有歌词的感觉，因为它好像本来就是一首歌，
每一句的前后半句不一定要和中文一个顺序，可以先翻译后半句再翻译前半句，

翻译的时候请将中英文都复制上来，我好对比，
就这样，这很重要，所以希望认真对待，
感激不尽。
最后一句是
然而 你在哪里
刚刚整错了 不好意思。

Answer 1

五年前，从我见到你的那一刻起。
Five years ago, from the moment I first saw you.

我爱上了你，爱的那样无法自拔。
I fell in love with you, love so deep.
(那麼深的爱）

仿佛你才是我的世界。
It seems like you're my whole world.

我把你融入了我的生命。
I brought you into every aspect of my life.
（我把你带进了我生命中的每一个方面）

我对你的爱，充满了身体的每一个细胞，每一滴血液。
My love for you, fills every single one of my cells, every single drop of my blood.

从来没有人像我这样爱你。
Never have anyone loved you like me.

你感觉到了吗?
Can you feel it?

我的真心，你感受到了吗?
My heart and feelings, are you feeling it?
（我的心和感觉）

我对你的爱是那么的强烈。
My love is so strong.
（我的爱是那麼的强）

可我知道，我们没有未来，我们没有明天。
Yet I know, we don't have a future, nor a tomorrow together.

你为什么不爱我？
Why, have you chosen not to love me?
（为什麼，你选择了不爱我？）

噢 当你离开的那个时候。
Oh when you left,

我想紧紧帮你抱住，可是我没有。
I wanted to wrap my hands tightly around you, but I didn't.
（我想用我的双手紧紧地抱住你）

我的勇气都被你的冷漠赶走了。
My courage was washed away by your calm and cool.
（我的勇气被你的镇定和冷漠给洗走了）

我是那么的爱你，可是让我深爱的你，却让我如此的伤心。
I loved you so, yet you, my deeply beloved, have hurt me so badly.

我见不到你，我仿佛快要死了。
Not being able to see you is killing me.

只有你的爱，能将我唤醒。
Only your love can wake me from this hell.
（只有你的爱才能把我从这个地狱里唤醒）

然而，你在哪里？
Yet, where are you?

没有完全贴切的翻译。
加了一些我觉得适合的东西。
比较文艺的:)
( )里面的字是我加的东西硬翻译过来的～虽然用中文读有些有点奇怪，可是用英文读的话就不会。
希望能帮得到你:)

Answer 2

Five years ago, I see you from the moment.
I love you, love that cannot extricate oneself.
If you are my world.
I put you in my life.
My love for you, full of every cell in the body, each drop of blood.
No one has ever so I love you.
Do you feel?
I sincerely, you feel?
My love for you is so strong.
But I know, we have no future, we have no tomorrow.
Why don't you love me?
Oh that time when you leave.
I want to help you hold tight, but I didn't.
I have the courage of your indifference was away.
I love you so much, but let me love you, let me so sad.
I don't see you, if I was going to die.
Only you can love, will wake me.
However, where are you?

Answer 3

Five years ago, I saw you from the moment.
I love you, love as away from him.
If you are my world.
I put you into my life.
My love for you, full of every cell of the body, every drop of blood.
No one has ever I do love you.
You feel that?
My heart, you feel the same?
My love for you is so strong.
But I know that we have no future, we have no tomorrow.
Why do not you love me?
Oh, when you leave at that time.
I would like to help you grip tightly, but I did not.
I have the courage to be rid of your cold.
I love you so, but I love you, make me so sad.
I see you, I seem to die.
Only your love, when I wake up.
However, where are you?

Answer 4

Five years ago, I see you from the moment.
I love you, love that cannot extricate oneself.
If you are my world.
I put you in my life.
My love for you, full of every cell in the body, each drop of blood.
No one has ever so I love you.
Do you feel?
I sincerely, you feel?
My love for you is so strong.
But I know, we have no future, we have no tomorrow.
Why don't you love me?
Oh that time when you leave.
I want to help you hold tight, but I didn't.
I have the courage of your indifference was away.
I love you so much, but let me love you, let me so sad.
I don't see you, if I was going to die.
Only you can love, will wake me.
Then, where are you?
分给我吧，快穷死了