Question

雅思作文求批改。麻烦给出大致分数。谢谢。

（这是task 1的作文。题目为剑桥真题5 test3）

Through this map we can see the town of Garlsdon has four parts: country side、town centre、housing and industry, there is a railway go through Garlsdon and three main roads to keep touch with other three town in this area.

There are two possible sites for the now supermarket, one is in the northwest area, in the countryside. It seems far away from customers, but this site is built between the railway and a main road to Hindon. These two roads support a fast and convent transport to this area. Though Hindon is a small town which has only 10000 populations, it still can become a big market.

The second site is in the Town Centre, which is the busiest area in Garlsdon, also near the railway and main roads to Bransdon (population 15000) and Gansdon (population 29000). That means there will be a lot of customers and business. The equal distance to two Industries, and surrounding by housing area, make this site become a fabulous choice. Unfortunately, there are no traffic zone in Town Centre, makes get into Town Centre become a difficult thing for most people.

Now we can see these two sites of a new supermarket both has its own advantages and disadvantages.

Answer 1

通过这个图上我们可以看到Garlsdon镇四个部分：国家一边，市中心，住房和行业，有铁路通过Garlsdon和三个主要道路，以配合其他三个城市在这方面的接触。

有两个现在超市的地点，一个是在西北地区，在农村。似乎远离客户，但这个网站之间的铁路及主要道路欣登兴建。这两条道路的支持，快速，修道院运输这一地区。虽然欣登是一个小城市，人口只有1.0万，但它仍然可以成为一个大市场。

另一幅土地位于市中心，这是在Garlsdon最繁忙的地区，也靠近铁路和主要公路的布兰斯顿（人口15000）和Gansdon（人口29000）。这意味着将有客户和生意。同等距离两个行业，以及房屋周围地区，使该网站成为一个神话般的选择。不幸的是，没有在市中心区的交通，使得进入市中心获得成为大多数人难以做到的。

现在，我们可以看到一个新的超市都拥有自己的优点和缺点这两个地点。

Answer 2

6 or 5.5